Episode Start

As you can see the page has a new look to it. That’s not the only change. I felt Episode two didn’t flow as quickly and as easily as it should have. The beginning, when the gang was at that tavern could have been done in one or two pages. I tightened up the story a bit for this episode to pick up the pace. Woking on my reader-builds-the-story-webcomic, Gork Gakk, really helped me to cut out the extra fat when telling a story. www.gorkgakk.com